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Today in class we started with a warm- up. The warm up had to do with making an inference and recognizing persuasive devices. We then moved on to getting out our first paragraph. If you do not like your first paragraph you may re-write it at home. After we got them pu we started to work with partners to do peer editing. They will check over your paper and make corrections. Here is an example of what i wrote after we edited it:By not taking on a lot of tasks that may cause pressure and not doing a lot of things that may cause stress, most eating disorders can be avoided. There are two main eating disorders. They are Bulimia and Anorexia. Bulimia is a psychological eating disorder. Anorexia is an eating disorder where people starve themselves. Anorexia is when a lot of people refuse to eat. Bulimia is an emotional illness. It is also when individuals expieience frequent and uncontrollable periods of over eating. These eating disorders usually occur in girls between the ages of 12 and 18. Eating disorders are incresing in young children. Also as you read on you will read about the causes, effects, signs, symptoms, and the treatments/ solutions.
All i did was say the description of certain eating disorders and when they occur. I also told what else would be in the redst of the paper.
On your paper you need to have headings for each of the sections. For example I might do The Causes of Eating Disorders. As the heading for my causes.

We then moved on to beginning to write the middle paragraphs for your paper. You might have atleast four paragraphs or you might have more. It depends on how many keywords that you have. Make sure that when you write your paper that you have headings for each keyword, an introductory sentence for each, a closing sentence, and you need to have at least six sentences in each paragraph.

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