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Today in class, our warm up was a little different. We first read someone's first two paragraphs, then we analyzed what they could change to make it better. We then wrote our changes down on paper. After we were done with commenting on this person's paper, we moved on to getting out our rough draft and our revising checklist. Mrs. Abrams then had some of the students read what they had as one of their topic sentences and some of their concluding sentences. After some of the students read what they had, we stapled our research checklist to our rough draft. We then got another research checklist so that we can peer edit. We then moved on to editing each other's papers.

Homework
If you do not finish editing this in class you need to have someone at home edit it where the other person left off. Make sure that you reda for thirty minutes and create an entry on your reading lof.

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